Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is a notion that those using a foreign language when residing in another nation can lead to various issues. In my opinion, I completely agree with this because it causes isolation and difficulty in carrying out daily tasks
First and foremost, the biggest social problem people speaking a foreign language in the nation they live have to encounter is being isolated. The main reason for this is that it is hard to get to know or make friends with locals when there is a language barrier. This blocks people from expressing themselves freely and makes it challenging for them to engage in daily conversations when they can not understand cultural contexts, jokes, or slang being used. For example, if a person gets invited to a social gathering, but struggles to communicate thoroughly and clearly, they start to feel like they are an outsider. As a result, over time this feeling of being left out adds up and causes them to separate themselves from others.
Secondly, one of the most crucial practical issues people have to face is that it could be exhausting for them to perform everyday tasks. This is because all the information is written by the mainland’s language. It makes them confused and frustrated, for they can not comprehend the directions on the map when using public transportation. Additionally, when they go shopping or eat out in a restaurant, it can get them in a dilemma situation where they are stuck in making a purchasing decision for not comprehending the nutrition facts shown on products or experience a tough time explaining to the waiter that they have food allergies which can not consume certain types of ingredients in their dish. Consequently, this could make them unsatisfied with their current living environment.
In conclusion, when people stay in a country, they need to spend time learning the language in that place. Otherwise, I firmly believe that it could result in plenty of issues which are getting isolated and lowering the ability to carry out daily activities.
- Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world today In some countries the use of alternative sources of energy is replacing fossil fuels Is this a positive or negative development 89
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football while other people think that taking part in individual sports like tennis or swimming is better Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- The tradition of families getting together to eat meals is disappearing What are the reasons What are the impacts 78
- Many think that religion should be taught in schools while others think it should be avoided Discuss both sides and give your opinion 95
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a complusory part of high school programmes for example working for a charity improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to youngger children 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82707750407 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550295857988 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.1434336316 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169113489831 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636525277627 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625633982427 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102823021015 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537917933902 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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