From the beginning of life and appearance of human beings in the planet earth, they have tried to interact with each other by different ways, ranging from producing special sounds painting on the walls of caves. However, after inventing languages among ancient people in communities, the way of communication has become more convenient. Therefore, for having an ideal life as a migrant in a foreign country, knowing the language of its people can be a paramount factor.
First of all, if understanding the language of the destination is challenging for someone, he/she cannot interact with others and socialize easily in different situations in a society. For example, we can consider a person without enough familiarity with a language who has a meeting with colleagues. Then the accent and lack of using proper collocations (language barrier) can cause finding a subject for ridiculing the person by the staff. Therefore, it can make disasters for him/her meaning, lack of self-confidence, self-steam, frustration and sometimes committing suicide if the problem remains unsolved.
Beside social issues mentioned, practical problems also are important to be considered. The first point is that showing lack of respect to the culture, costume and conventions of the foreign country can create problems in different situations for foreigner. By this I mean that, in some cases the tension between fellow citizens and the rude alien soars, causing lack of respect for the person in a area that he/she lives then stranger becomes socially naïve, and is always worried about his/her security. The second point can be difficulties faced in finding jobs because employers tend to recruit applicants that are fluent enough in speaking to prevent from probable problems in companies. For example, clients and other staff become tired if they try to explain more in every field that they interact with a stranger.
To conclude, I strongly agree with the statement because social and practical obstacles are unavoidable, and they should be considered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'collocations'' or 'collocation's'?
Suggestion: collocations'; collocation's
...hen the accent and lack of using proper collocations language barrier can cause finding a su...
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Line 5, column 398, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...using lack of respect for the person in a area that he/she lives then stranger be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, for example, i mean, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35294117647 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87889741089 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.131942653 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228199454829 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082230729851 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384287420042 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137940874063 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330414469678 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.