Sometimes people have to live in a country that requires them to speak nonnative language. Some people opine that this situation will cause both social and practical problems to occur. I completely agree with the view because of several reasons.
Firstly, social problem will most likely to occur because language serves as a communication bridge between people. All people use language when they want to say something, whether it is a long or short conversation. Therefore, if one does not master the language that most people are using, he will most likely be isolated from any social group. This can happen everywhere, including neighborhood and working places. For instance, a guy from United States just moved to Japan, where most of people in his working place are speaking in Japanese. Because he does not really master Japanese, he can not blend in with his workmates.
Secondly, practical problem will emerge because language is inseparable from doing daily activities. This can be purchasing public transportation ticket, ordering food menu, to using public facilities. All of these activities require understanding a language. Hence, if one does not understand the language that is mostly used in a country, he will find difficulty in doing his daily activities. For example, a guy from United Kingdom just emerged to Taiwan, where most of the food menus are written in Mandarin Chinese. Because he does not really understand Mandarin Chinese, he then finds difficulty in ordering menu.
In conclusion, I agree that residing in a country that requires us to speak foreign language may create significant problems in social and practical matters because language serves as a communication bridge between people and language is inseparable from doing daily activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 485, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...nited States just moved to Japan, where most of people in his working place are speaking in Ja...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31448763251 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82345643747 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515901060071 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.047768489 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235910206935 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809957415218 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684529622088 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179336826268 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718385301868 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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