Learning to speak a different language is never easy, and even when you master it does not mean you can live in an environment that everybody say that as their language. I personally believe that this not only caused severe social problems, but also result in daily life issue as a whole.
In my opinion, there are hundreds of problems developed while you live in another country where speak foreign language. In terms of society, I believe that the biggest difficulty is communication. Without the same saying, you might be isolated in public gathering, when a person traveled far from home, family and friends, being isolated might cause serious mental illness such as depression. Language barrier might also be a factor that prevent you from making friends in the region.
I also think that living in foreign countries result in a lot of practical problems that happen on your daily basis as well. As you have known, different languages more or less means different cultures, this lead to some misunderstanding that sometimes embarrassed you. Moreover, some people find it difficult to access local transport or go to the local supermarket or even eat in a local restaurant, because of language barrier, again. In offices, I think this is the worst, people can not freely express their feeling due to the fact that they always have to struggle with words, therefore, they can not find something that could say their opinions, this has considerable effects on the possibilities of promotion at work.
In conclusion, I would argue that a lot of problems from daily issue to social issues can develop when you choose to live abroad, the best solution to this is that you should learn to speak fluently local languages.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 78
- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 67
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s
- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun means is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...have known, different languages more or less means different cultures, this lead to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94482758621 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6781451334 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572413793103 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0344725142 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.363636364 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329350877666 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120027734344 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774821737178 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196042018217 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152724194885 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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