Not surprisingly, people who live oversea will encounter many intense difficulties because of language and culture barriers. As a result, I totally believe this can lead to many serious social problems and practical problems for the following reasons.
The main reason that having to speak a foreign language can cause social problems is through breaking down understanding when interacting with local people. Language is the most powerful to bring the people around the world together that helps them to communicate and understand each other. Therefore, the language barrier prevents people who might not be able to speak and understand the language to get along with the community in other countries. Another reason is the cultural disparity that people have inappropriate behaviors to offend the inhabitant’s norms. For instance, in Thailand, people raise their thumbs to others if they desire to commend. However, this expression is very impolite in Australia so it can cause dissatisfaction to their neighbors and have a strong impact on their social life if a person settles down in Australia.
With regard to practical problems, it’s apparent to see when people find a job. An individual who works in a foreign country might not behave in a particular culture with whom he serves. For example, if an individual works in a restaurant, people might make mistakes to offend others due to misunderstanding of culture so they can face some difficulties in making ends meet.
In conclusion, not knowing a language as well as cultural gaps when living abroad can cause social unrest and pragmatic concern to integrate well in a community at all. In my opinion and from my experience, people should prepare and gain knowledge to easily overcome the serious obstacles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28070175439 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9698059894 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564912280702 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8156046009 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317565860172 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101994785605 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898468515381 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178052597096 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529156763893 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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