Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is believed that language is a tremendous barrier of social and practical matters for people who intend to relocate or study in a foreign country. I definitely agree with this view.
To begin with, the non-native speakers encounter obstructions to enlarge their knowledge about culture, traditions and customs in foreign environment because they have a difficulty in communication with inhabitants. Thus, individuals tend to seclude themselves from community in which they cannot understand the conversations or express ideas due to lingual incompetence. For instance, in my country, for preparation of Annual Mid-Autumn Festival, families in neighborhood often gather together to discuss about decorating the walls, making cakes and lanterns for children. Therefore, you may feel to be uncomfortable and frustrated if you do not assimilate all that you hear or speak fluently and confidently to contribute your notion.
Besides the social issues, practical problems would be challenging for people who are pursuing the academic qualification or looking for employment in different language. For example, the international students would struggle for making presentations, writing dissertations and understanding lectures. Consequently, they would have enormous gaps about knowledge with others and gradually lose their motivations to gain high grades in exams. Moreover, job hunting is a difficulty for persons in foreign country. They would have in trouble to appreciate absolutely job description and be very nervous to tackle the professional questions during interview. Thus, the language skills are attributed to be detrimental for harvesting an appropriate employment.
In conclusion, people who are living in different country have significant hurdle with a certain language level to communicate efficiently and fluently. Without proper lingual skills, people will completely confront some social and practical problems.
- You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he / she should get a job.Write a letter to this friend. In your letter- Say why he / she would not enjoy going to college- Exp 78
- You would like to participate in a training course. Write a letter to your manager about the course and ask for permission. In your letter: Give details of the course; why is it useful for you? And how will it benefit your work? 78
- Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. In your letter include:- what you bought- what problem is- why you want a refund 73
- You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he / she should get a job.Write a letter to this friend. In your letter- Say why he / she would not enjoy going to college- Exp 73
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91785714286 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25772042185 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635714285714 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9718217745 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.357142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195518673637 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067120768035 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577399495458 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133207658102 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047698236443 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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