While there are many benefits to live in a country with the foreign language, there are some drawbacks to consider, regard to social issue and practical affairs. I completely agree with the above line and this essay will give explanations.
One of the most important factors, which is vital among human kinds is communication and common language removes communication barriers and increase convenience. Therefore, lack of the local language knowledge causes serious consequences deal with making friend and as a result bring loneliness. Apart from this, something might not be known as good expression in another culture and a new comer using them offends others. To clarify, a survey in 2015 showed that most of migrants suffered the social aspect, which comes from language obstacles.
Turning to the other effects of language on people who live in a foreign country. The individual will have trouble finding work if he/she is not good in local language. As a result, the unwell-paid job is supposed to them and economic issue would be increase their problems. For example, most of new migrants usually work in restaurants or as servants because they are not familiar with the culture and language. Therefore, if a person learn the local language to be fluent, he/ she can improve his/her job and rise salary.
In conclusion, I firmly agree with the belief that the person may have problems such as communication problems that affect the individual's social life or does not find good work if he or she lives in abroad that differs language.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: NEW_COMER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newcomer'?
Suggestion: newcomer
...ood expression in another culture and a new comer using them offends others. To clarify, ...
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Line 2, column 464, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the migrants') or simply say ''most migrants''.
Suggestion: most of the migrants; most migrants
...o clarify, a survey in 2015 showed that most of migrants suffered the social aspect, which comes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0546875 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7156501725 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5859375 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7703596038 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.833333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211480064711 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685869980159 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602919467153 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120431957261 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169377685551 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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