The chart compares the percentage of regular physical activities which Australian male and female in various age group did in 2010.
From an overall perspective, male in early age were more eager to do physical activities than female, however this issue conversed for men and women in middle ages. It means woman paid more attention to physical activities than men in the mentioned age.
Teenage males who were in the age of 15 to 24 had the highest percentage among other ages (52.8%). By increasing the age of men , their passion for doing activities became less which in the age of 24 to 35, 35 to 44 , and 45 to 54 the percentage of activities were done by Australian men became approximately 42, 40 and 43 respectively. Also as the man became older, more than 55, they do more activities than previous ages.
Women did the least physical activities in the both ages: over 65 and between 15 and 24 which were about 47%. Also female who divided in 3 categories from 35 to 64 were in the approximately same percentage about 53
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The given chart illustrates
The given chart illustrates the proportion of Australian men and women of different age categories performing regular physical exercise in 2010.
At a glance, we can say that the men at their younger age perform more exercise then they do in other stages of life. Whereas, the womens are more likely to do the maximum physical exercise in their middle age.
Firstly, looking at the data of men, we can say that, the percentage of men performing physical activities decreases with the age as we can see decline after the initial 52.8% in age group of 15-24 to 42.2% in age group 25-34. we can witness further decrease to 39.5% at the age group 35-44.However after the age of 44, physical efforts of men increases gradually as seen in age group 45-54, 55-64 and 65+ with the percentage of men engaging in physical works increasing to 43.1, 45.1, and 46.7 respectively.
Lastly, looking at the figures of women, we can say that the physical efforts of women increase with the age and start to decline after the age of 50. As we can see in the chart, where the efforts of womens have increased with the age resulting to 52.5% and 53.3% in age group of 35-44 and 45-54 respectively after initial 47.7% at the age group of 15-24. However after the age of 50, women are less reluctant to do the physical activities as we can see the efforts decline to 47.1% by the age of 65.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6174863388 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70337288988 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535519125683 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.984372456 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.625 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350904958749 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167873141172 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120446695036 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248225229197 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123578788082 0.0819641961636 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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