As the globalization is on its upsurge, more and more individuals are eager to work and live in overseas countries, which raises a claim that it can trigger detrimental social as well as practical diploma. I am totally inclined to support this idea due to some reasons.
With regards to social problems, I believe that the higher oblige on speaking a foreign language is in line with the lower threshold of facing culture shock that is related to psychological issues. To begin with, the human is thought to live and integrate better if they belong to certain groups and communities that share the similarities in thoughts and behaviors; yet, living among foreigners who speak a totally different language can build up a restriction to get along well since one language is closely connected with one distinguishable culture. Later on, this difference in culture leads to the depression whose symptom is feeling self-conscious, causing the higher possibility of giving up the attempt to immerse ourselves on the local society.
Another supporter for this is that the separated features in language may decay the competitiveness in the job market. There would be no companies or corporations agreeing to hire employees who are not able to acknowledge the native language. Even if those white-collar workers are welcomed, they will get a higher risk of being seriously criticized for making rudimental mistakes in using the language. To be worse, some people may cope with physical problems including abuse, violence and discrimination in their workplace due to their not fluently speaking the native language.
To summarize, settling a life in a country in which the local citizens speak a different language from ours comprises certain issues in connection with psychology and physical condition. However, I believe that if we are determined and industrious enough, we can still be able to overcome all of those aforementioned problems.
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. 95
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- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...immerse ourselves on the local society. Another supporter for this is that the s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, still, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26045016077 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06340600032 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591639871383 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4196394469 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.727272727 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2727272727 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23898244683 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749759335462 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523596367483 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126011060055 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542817496705 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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