Living in a country you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

Essay topics:

Living in a country you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

Living abroad can be significantly challenging socially and practically because of the different language use. Despite the opposing view, I strongly agree with this argument that incompetence in foreign language can bring about misunderstandings and difficulties.
I believe that language and culture are closely linked to each other. One example is that, in the western society, asking people about their age at the first meeting can be thought as being rude. However, this seems to be quite common in Asian culture. As a result, Asian people in the western society can be in trouble in social relationship. In addition, language barrier can have a negative impact on practical situations, such as getting a job in a foreign country. As most employers want to hire people who have good communicative skills. These are highly crucial issues when it comes to life in a foreign country since they can eventually end up social isolation.
On the other hand, it can be supposed that low foreign language ability does not necessarily lead to demanding time in a foreign country. This is because minor mistakes stemmed from cultural differences can be understood. For instance, foreigners who live in Korea sometimes do not use the honorific to the elderly, but this is not thought as serious issues because it is not intended. Moreover, language barrier in practical aspects such as seeking employment can be alleviated by choosing manual occupations that do not require advanced language skills.
In conclusion, it is clear that most people living overseas encounter challenging time socially and practically, although language barrier and cultural gap can be overcome depending on situations.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 471, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... as getting a job in a foreign country. As most employers want to hire people who ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30111524164 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96897813963 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579925650558 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2541036063 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261959147855 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970004246183 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601849927837 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174777501321 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337350493047 0.056905535591 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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