living today is better than in past grandparents time

Essay topics:

living today is better than in past, grandparents time.

World today is enormously expanding than it was decades ago. Many changes are taking place each and everyday, creating a luxurious life style. In my opinion, I definitely think that living today is comfortable and easy than many years ago. I think this way due to many reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

First of all, Living is relatively easy today because of worldwide technological developments and availability ready-made food. Everyday technology is growing to its peaks and everybody is holding on to technology to do all the work, which needed much strength or mind power. Although people have physical fitness or mind power, they are using technology in utilizing needs without using their strength. For instance, when I feel hungry and I don’t feel like cooking, I always go online, use my internet and order from one of my favorite restaurants nearby, and food package is directly delivered to my home. I have my meal ready in a plate within just half an hour, without even getting up from my sofa. During my grand parents' days, they have to grow crops and cook food on their own by using their strength as there were no restaurants or ready-made food available. That is why, I take this moment to definitely thank internet and ready-made food available today and making our living easier than it was decades ago.

Furthermore, living, at present, is comfortable because of work from home jobs are available nowadays, which are not even known in the early ages. Most of working women are giving importance to these jobs as they could work comfortably at home and simultaneously do other household chores at the same time and thus increasing their productivity and making themselves successful. For example, My friend recently had a baby and could not go to work outside as she have to take care of baby. She tried to look for a baby sitter/home day care, but she could not find one because of the unprecedented COVID-19 times. Fortunately, one day she saw an advertisement about teaching SAT online. She felt amazing and went through interview process and she got selected. She is immensely happy as it is a work from home job. Consequently, she is able to take care of her months baby and working at home conveniently and this job made her life beautiful and stress free.

In a nutshell, Living today is more luxurious and ease than it was years ago because of technological innovations and readily available food, and work from home opportunity.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... Many changes are taking place each and everyday, creating a luxurious life style. In my...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 464, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...and could not go to work outside as she have to take care of baby. She tried to look...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2067.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76820489635 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542452830189 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9931909961 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.35 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107046507138 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402773964401 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674882254036 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947905383027 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592673954294 0.056905535591 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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