Machines are becoming very sophisticated. While machines enable individual workers to many benefits; they cause some serious harm too.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages machines bring to the workers and give your own opinion.
Machines have been developed significantly over the past few years and bring a number of benefits to workers. Although machines are blame-worthy for some reason, I believe the advantages of machines outweigh the disadvantages.
There are a number of conveniences machines bring to workers’ lives. First and foremost, machines help to solve a valuable amount of time, which leads to greater production with correct accuracy within the shortest possible time. For example, bridges and buildings can now be constructed within days that used to take years or decades earlier. Another major benefit is that machines mitigate the extra labour of workers. Machines are being used in modern garments and factories to reduce workload and pressure on workers. As a result, they live a happy and fulfilling life.
Machines, on the other hand, are culpable of worsening the lives of individual workers. This is because machines make people unemployed since a machine can accomplish the tasks of ten workers at a time. Thus, owners get tempted to sack unnecessary workers from the company. This even leads to further misery and distress for their family members. Besides, a number of workers might not know how to operate machines subtly and smoothly, which causes unwanted accidents and makes them fall into dangerous situations, such as injury, disability, and death.
In conclusion, Though machines keep few negative outcomes for the workers, I believe the positive impacts of machines are much more than the negative ones.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f machines outweigh the disadvantages. There are a number of conveniences machi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uch as injury, disability, and death. In conclusion, Though machines keep few ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33609958506 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72712929789 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643153526971 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0512994152 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8571428571 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306211241121 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106506540603 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798074704699 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188369331731 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444767742364 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f machines outweigh the disadvantages. There are a number of conveniences machi...
^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uch as injury, disability, and death. In conclusion, Though machines keep few ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33609958506 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72712929789 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643153526971 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0512994152 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8571428571 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306211241121 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106506540603 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798074704699 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188369331731 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444767742364 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.