The Main purpose of public library is to provide books and they shouldn’t waste their Limo limited resources and space on providing expensive Hitech media such as computer software videos and DVDs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Books are the best friend of a person. People get a lot of knowledge from the book and also life learning lessons. Nowadays, in this modern period for the educational purpose government provide different types of electronic equipments like computer, projector, DVDs etc. Which proves most helpful to student and and all age group people. In my view, to a larger extent, I disagree with the topic, as this electronic equipment I have many H advantages to public. This essay will discuss some of the positive factors to my define my view.
To begin with, there are many reasons behind providing latest technological if equipments. Firstly, government try to Implement new technology for local people to educate them. For whom who cannot able to study in the top schools and universities such as physically disabled people financially disable people et cetera. Physically disabled students who cannot attend the classes, they can use nearby public library. Which can help them in distance learning. Moreover, government provides all these equipments at very low price. So, who cannot afford the higher fees they can easily access the library. To cite an example, in Ahmedabad, Gujarat, government started public library with latest technological equipments in 2017, in the same year there were around 253 students got chance to study.
Increased competition, government tried to educate the people of country. So they provide such equipments. Further more, it also beneficial for people in many ways like, it is time saver and it connects people to the world. It is also a futuristic program for the government.
Conversely, on the other side public library provides book also, but the new generation not take much interest in books. Because of the internet they can find anything on the internet. So government provide such thing instead of books.
To conclude, youngsters are the future of any country. Government changes the system according to generation for the education purpose, which beneficial for country and people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, such as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24539877301 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75114899746 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9379007564 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.347826087 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1739130435 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95652173913 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161626785098 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487290809438 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540585230725 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887527858903 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565422465875 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.