It is a fact that the world’s metropolises are dramatically growing which affect the young generations these day.This essay will highlight some of the main problems of this and suggest several viable approaches to reduce the adverse effects of the issue.
Several related problems can be anticipated when major cities expand rapidly in social and economic development. To begin with, there is no doubt to say that cities with continued development create a competitive environment for young people who hope to land a decent job. A wide range of people rush to developed cities will lead to overcrowding as well as tough pressure for job opportunities, which will demand young people to have wide experience and professional academic knowledge. This is a drawback for people with less impressive educational backgrounds, and contributes to the struggle of financial troubles. Moreover, this development has an influence on several health issues. The pressures of job, housing, as well as self-sufficiency may put the young at a higher risk of mental problems.
Nevertheless, there are some viable remedies to alleviate those issues. The best approach to address this problem is for the government to implement measures that assist young people in finding work. This can be a good experience for young people to intern in a company as they will become more professional in the future. Furthermore, parents have to encourage and share the burden with their children. Furthermore, parents should support and share the burden with their children in order to avoid putting additional unseen pressure on them.
In conclusion, although the growth of cities can lead to a lack of work and some health problems, some solutions, namely the government policy and the encouragement from family, have been proven their feasibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, as to, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30795847751 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00700602329 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567474048443 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5492212036 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252660912334 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803148402288 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636211331564 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134963434896 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049520657455 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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