It is an obvious fact that the continued spreads of the dynamic cites has caused some noticeable problems in the daily life of teenagers who are settling there. This essay will take a look at some of major problems and suggest several viable approaches to remedy this situation.
To begin with, there may be a number of issues anticipated when most of young people gravitate forwards to living in the big cites. Initially, they are likely to face with the high unemployment rate. In fact, any undergraduates always has a strong craving for landing a decent jobs. But a few among them can fulfill their goals because of the applicants overdose in a hashly competitive labour market. For instance, fast-growing cities like New York or Tokyo have attracted thousands of rural people to migrate to urban areas for better career opportunities, forcing a various number of inexperienced job applicants unemployed. As a result, the young will struggle for finacial problems like the living expense or tuition fees. Subsequently, adolescents living in the urban areas have more possiblity to suffer from social evils than ones who live in the countryside. This is on the grounds that many recreational activities such as bar or pub clubs are available. In case these places is not official, it would be a space of illegal acts namely drugs, frauds and smuggling. The moment teenagers get involved in the banned acts, they would deteriorate themselves. Consequently, it poses a threat to their development of morality and characteristics in the long term.
However, there are several viable remedy to solve the problems described above. The first solution is for governments and local authorities to encourage teeanagers’ family to relocate to surrounding countryside thereby reducing the migration wave to city centers. Simultaneously, it is essential for their parents to raise awareness to prevent young peple from engaging in anti- social activities Another measure coming from the young would be to actively learn how to adapt to such an exciting and vibrant enviroment.
In conclusion, although living in the big cities can affect adversely the life of young people in terms of employment and personalization, some solutions aforementioned like encouragement and self- consciousness have been proved their feasiblity to alleviate the aboved problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'remedies'?
Suggestion: remedies
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Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, so, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29679144385 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07002251168 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614973262032 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2478090845 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.529411765 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310422031058 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767281105395 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634266144887 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174963012658 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175744927159 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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