A majority of people say buy Canon, and a few say buy Nikon. What should I buy, I’m confused?
The market today is flooded with numerous options. The advancement in technology is bringing the cost of ownership of gadgets within the reach of every person. This is very much important to empower people so that before making any decision, people think through the various aspects of what they intend to buy, and for what.
Currently, the most favoured brands available to make a choice between are Canon and Nikon. If we go through the history of both the brands, it will help us to make a more judicious judgement, based on personal choices, liking of various factors and the cost that seems favourable to an individual.
Canon was born in the USA, there the native culture is more formal and professional. The thoughts of the people of USA are towards professional achievements, gaining grounds in the corporate world. There is buildings are in the shades of black and whites. The architecture is about tall, straight buildings, with facades made of glass in the blue or green colour at most. This has lead to a camera system which captures super sharp images, but not many shades of a colour.
On the other hand, Nikon comes from the colourful land of Japan, where nature itself grows in vibrant, myriad hues of just about any colour that one can think of. From the cotton fields in white to colourful fields of tulips that grow all across the island nation. The traditions go back to thousands of years and multitude of cultures. This has lead to a camera system that is build to capture colours in a scene like no other system in the world, the sharpness though immense, does not come as close to what Canon has.
To conclude, make sue you understand what you desire from your camera. The technology today has made all the camera systems almost the same, be it quality, the technology involved, the options available, but for the individual characteristics of each brand’s philosophy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'There are buildings'?
Suggestion: There are buildings
...gaining grounds in the corporate world. There is buildings are in the shades of black and whites. ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241758241758 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.137362637363 0.155533422707 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0934065934066 0.0946595960268 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.032967032967 0.0501214627716 66% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0247252747253 0.0437548338989 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.14010989011 0.122226691241 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0357142857143 0.0403226058552 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55794265683 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.032967032967 0.0326793684256 101% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.126373626374 0.0861772015684 147% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00549450549451 0.021408717616 26% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0247252747253 0.011925033212 207% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1902.0 1933.35771543 98% => OK
No of words: 327.0 316.048096192 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81651376147 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345565749235 0.374742101984 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.22629969419 0.28420135186 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14373088685 0.203846283523 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107033639144 0.137316102897 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55794265683 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.037074148 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599388379205 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 68.3497316107 60.7387585426 113% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4375 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9900739308 49.517814964 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.875 127.492653851 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 0.814263465372 31% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 43.067469419 49.1944974215 88% => OK
Elegance: 2.14084507042 1.69124875643 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119381415317 0.332605444948 36% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112385774572 0.102741220458 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0587762477587 0.0668466124924 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.589040562665 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147809762629 0.148594505496 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573627119404 0.134430193775 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470182838915 0.0742795772207 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.353968426435 0.324371583561 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0681348581398 0.0638462369009 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837653685666 0.228012699653 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043682027365 0.058150111329 75% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
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flaws:
You have grammatical issues, like:
This has lead to a camera system that is build to capture colours in a scene
This has led to a camera system that is built to capture colours in a scene
Rates: 67.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9