Many animal species are under the threat of extinction. What are the reasons? What can be done solve this problem?
Rapid human developments on earth is making wildlife population to the teetering on the brink of extinction. This problem is caused by a lot of factors, and I believe it could be addressed by both individuals and the government.
There are three culprits for animals in danger of death. First, numerous forests have been cleared at astonishing rates causing the destruction of habitat as well as the lack of food that kills species in greater number than ever before. Especially, this is one of the reasons for creating a severe biological imbalance on the earth. For example, the clearing of forests to growcrops of famers accidentally made wild animals losing their shelter. Second, man-made pollution also contributes to the extinction of animal. It is worth noting that air pollution from burning waste or coal is directly harming the respiratory system of birds and insects; similarly, amphibians have changed both physiologically and behaviorally as a result of this contamination. Finally, natural disaster makes animal disappearance. Take dinosaurs as an example: thousand of years ago, a single catastrophic event, such as a massive volcanic eruption or a collision between an asteroid and the earth caused the extinction of this species.
In order to address the problem of endangered animal, several actions can be taken. One approach is that the government establish a wildlife sanctuary where haven’t any threat to animals such as poaching, farming, fishing,... Another way is ban to discharge untreated into the environment and develop new technologies to reduce pollutants. In addition, everyone should effort to learn green credentials. For example, each of people can make to replant the trees in areas or cut down on using fossil fuels and using alternative energy.
In conclusion, the extinction of animals can be resulted from development of human; however, if we have suitable measures to balance it, this frightening scenario may be avoided.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, similarly, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33762057878 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04560512032 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646302250804 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9453949249 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200267606344 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563046670467 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487535286836 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119507640681 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351735151166 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.