Science has made astonishing advancements in recent times. Many diseases have been eradicated from the earth by successfully creating their antidotes. Vaccines for these common diseases help children live a healthy life. In my opinion, parents should compulsorily get their child a dose of basic vaccines.
Having healthy agents in the body will help in keeping children safe from typical diseases which otherwise can have serious consequences. For instance, In India diseases like Polio and Tuberculosis have been eliminated to an extent. Out of every 100 children born only 3-4 suffer from these diseases. This has been possible because of the vaccines given during their childhood.
Moreover, having every child immunized will help in creating a community that is strong and free from past epidemics. A recent study conducted by the World Health Organization noticed that children from parents who were vaccinated during their childhood have a natural resistance towards many known diseases. This means, by making getting vaccinated a necessity; will help in securing a better future.
Finally, we are living in an age where, even, after doing so many research in health and on the human body, every year our society faces a new challenge in the form of a new, not known, virus. The most recent example is the H1B virus. Our scientists have done a commendable job by successfully creating an antidote for this deadly virus. Many lives have already been lost by the time vaccines were made available in the markets. It is essential to give future generations the antidote of these infections.
Therefore, In my opinion, to live a healthy, create a robust community and for building a secure future; it is essential to make parents vaccinate their children against common diseases by law.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much research', 'a good deal of research'.
Suggestion: much research; a good deal of research
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22068965517 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72580481521 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7009233437 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0588235294 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248094142534 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795347224522 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608151045619 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158453711642 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749311095677 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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