Large number of people are accommodated in big flats in most of the cities;this may have many benefits and draw backs ,apartments can be built in small area to include a lot of people but will be a problem in terms of privacy and waste disposal.
As a result of industrialisation and globalisation people are moving to cities for jobs and better lifestyle, this made increase in need for accommodation. as there was a decrease in the land plots in urban area to accommodate large population resulted in the construction of sky keepers. people are benefited from many of the means such as availability of all facilities in flats easily and can enjoy the city life .There will be good recreation like club houses ,gym ,party area , security etc.
Although people can enjoy the urban life it will create a lot of problems .poulton and waste disposal are big issues in cities, as aresult there will be mosquitos and other flies which cause serious health hazards.safe water will be another serious matter of concern due to industrial and domestic pollute nts in the water bodies.people become sedentary in their life style as we have all facilities in a hand away ,this will make people inert
Ower all we can see even though we are amused with an urban flat life there are a lot of burdens associated with it.
- The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71615720524 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76852413714 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580786026201 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.691505687 49.4020404114 325% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.0 106.682146367 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.8 20.7667163134 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183778482161 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10447617015 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675856704288 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112731127231 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857914340476 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 13.0946893788 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.3001002004 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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