Nowadays, the majority of people prefer to live in a big apartment in the numerous cities. It is true that it has a more merits than demerits and this essays will explain in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, there are numerous advantages of living in a large apartment. A predominant merit is these blocks need less space. To explain it, in metropolitan cities, these apartments are constructed in a vertical as well as horizontal ways. Due to this, minimum space is covered in which other space will be used for other building new houses or some playing areas for children's. To epitome, a survey was conducted by Mumbai University in 2019 has revealed that, 70% builders construct sky-scraper building to cover the less space. Thus, it is the best idea to live in a large apartment.
Furthermore, it is also helped to save the atmosphere. To explicate it, nowadays, most of the families are migrating in cities owing to the fact that they need houses for living. For making new houses numerous tress cut down for space which effect on the atmosphere as well as on birds. To exemplify, it had been written in the newspaper that 50% of plants cut to make a new building. Therefore, it is the best idea to reduce deforestation.
To recapitulate, constructing large apartments is many cities have more advantages than disadvantage. Due to this, individuals can save the environment as well as utilize the space in better way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the families') or simply say ''most families''.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, as for, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9313304721 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97820062126 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557939914163 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9936857261 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0714285714 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196983898439 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06879286019 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818809801553 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132996065475 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716162023011 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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