It is undeniable that nowadays pollution is increasing day by day. It is argued by some individuals that the best way to overcome from air pollution is that people should not use cars for one day all over the world.While, other opined that there are other alternatives factors to solve this problem. I will shed light on both opinions of the aforementioned statement and will further delineate it with plausible reasons followed by reasonable opinion.
commencing with those who are in the favor of car free day to reduce air pollution. The reason behind this is nowadays most of people are working and they use their own vehicles to go their workplaces. Because of hectic schedule they do not have enough time to travel on public transport.As a result, the combustion of fossil fuel in vehicles leads to the emission of harmful gases like carbon-dioxide and carbon-monoxide.A car-free day will certainty reduce emission and improve air quality on the day and perhaps on the next day as well.
As far as I am concerned, I advocate in the favor of latter statement.Because the best way to reduce the air pollution is to stop burning of coal and other alternate source of energy.Moreover, government use coal as a fuel to make electricity which is the major cause of pollution and its consumption should be reduced. At last, engineers should make automated cars which only work by using computers on the internet.
To recapitulate, I strongly believe that higher authority should find some other way to reduce the air-pollution. Because car-free day is not a permanent solution to overcome this growing concern.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...use cars for one day all over the world.While, other opined that there are other alte...
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...use cars for one day all over the world.While, other opined that there are other alte...
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...ion. The reason behind this is nowadays most of people are working and they use their own veh...
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...eople are working and they use their own vehicles to go their workplaces. Because...
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...r own vehicles to go their workplaces. Because of hectic schedule they do not have eno...
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...ough time to travel on public transport.As a result, the combustion of fossil fuel...
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...al and other alternate source of energy.Moreover, government use coal as a fuel to make ...
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... other way to reduce the air-pollution. Because car-free day is not a permanent solutio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, well, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0037037037 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07702000744 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551851851852 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.2184856002 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.1 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315735363008 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123184111747 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762095421904 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198216070152 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678092278454 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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