In this contemporary era, majority of adults are facing obesity problem and it is also increasing day by day and become very common in teenagers. In this forthcoming paragraphs I will highlights the valid reason of this problem and how it can be solved.
To commence with, there are numerous factors for increase obesity among teens.A predominant reason is that nowadays adults are eating too much fast food. To explicate it, in this modern era, both parents are working due to which they do not have enough time for their children's. They even do not know what type of food their children's are consuming. Owing to the fact that by consuming large amount of unhealthy food leads to obesity. To epitome, a survey was conducted by Health organization in 2016 has revealed that 70% of teenagers are facing weight gaining problem because of junk food.As a result, if parents take care their children's diet then this problem will decrease among adults.
Furthermore, today's all people are living sedentary lifestyles and they do not give much attention to workout and other health related exercise.In other words, for a short distance they prefer to go to by a car or a motorbike rather than walking.They also eating heavy food and after that they do not focus on workout and facing health related problems.To exemplify, it was written in the newspaper that respiratory problems become very common in youngsters. Therefore, if individuals maintain their lifestyles and use bicycles for a short distance then it also help them to become their body fit and healthy.
To recapitulate, obesity is considered a diseases however, it is not a bigger problem, it can be solved by changing our lifestyles as well as consuming healthy food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00692041522 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72340981195 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.262341947 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.7 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227184173463 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909687921094 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507441433245 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142436591039 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442971146541 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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