In many counties, more and more women have full-time jobs as men. There is a logic that they should share the housework equally with men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Since the dawn of the time, women have been a pivotal part in civilization and development of mankind. Since it is evident that women are working full-time just like men, it is my fervent conviction that chores should be divided equally between husbands and wives.
To commence with, unequal distribution of housework catalyzes injuries in both women mental and physical development. Stepping into the 21st century, we can inarguably see that the line between which work is entitled to women and which is men’s responsibility is blurred and hardly clear-cut. There is no disputing the fact that women are now embarking on various careers in different walks of life and can supplement the family income considerably. In this sense, if domestic work is not shared equally, it will, without doubt, plague women and thus physical or emotional damages will undeniably become well-documented in most cases.
Another plausible reason for husbands and wives to share the same amount of chores is rooted in the fact that such practice can, to an extent, instill ethos of caring and sharing into children during formative years. Since there is mounting evidence that children’s behavior is often a replica of their parents, it is no exaggeration to say that such approach would more or less function as a spirited fightback against individualism and egoism in children’s development. Accordingly, in the long term, children will show courtesy and professional etiquette in the distant future when they grow up.
In conclusion, it is advisable that working couples be given equal responsibility when it comes to domestic work. This is undoubtedly of enormous significance to the happiness and the well-being of the family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, so, still, thus, well, in conclusion, in most cases, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31272727273 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0391908449 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625454545455 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0074374634 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.818181818 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177630520114 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578695675671 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467121650824 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948279628686 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624088210622 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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