Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development, but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?
Developing the economics nowadays seems to be an important mission for each nation around the world. However, it is widely believed that those changes is likely to make some values of society get to be lost. In my opinion, I think that economic development may bring more benefits to us than drawbacks.
Firstly, the development of economic can make a change in our lifestyle. It is true that some cultural living habits will be replaced by the modern ones in the period of technology. However, with the help from some electronic devices, people may realize the convinience in their daily routines. Therefore, they can save a great amount of time to dedicate to more important things in our economic development. For instance, people have no longer to wash clothes by their hands since the emerge of washing machine.
Another advantage is that the economic developments provide varieties of relaxing in the recreation field. In particular, high-end equipments such as smartphones, TVs or laptops has played as a main factor in entertainment methods of the users. As a result, they feel more powerful to improve their economic as well as to bring their country on the higher position. For example, the population of smartphones has made a significant contribution to not only the profitable bussiness but also donate into the budget of that country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 483, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...er to wash clothes by their hands since the emerge of washing machine. Another advantag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09417040359 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87765223446 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636771300448 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.6491916708 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309375294491 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100087635681 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719473951469 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195529114509 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316055580062 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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