In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing, what do you think are the main cause of crime? how can we deal with those causes
At the present time, breaking news about society's vices have become a matter of great concern. from my perspective, there are several reasons leading to this problem and all we need is to find an effective solution so as to tackle with it completely.
in my opinion, the primary reason why the government have to confront with a lot if issues is the unemployment, on the societal level, people in that group are not provided a suitable job in order to pay for their living cost, so they may be drown in failure and become homeless. As the consequence, some bad purpose will appear and because the unemployed are no table to find another way to against their circumstances, they will find it easy to be an offender, Besides that, parallel with the globalization, human also seem to gradually change their nature, due to under a lot of working pressure, they have been more competitive and irritating. people can make use of some evil tricks or even murdering someone to be a higher title and in order to get as much as profits.
However, this is not a global issue which we are not capable of solving. there are some useful solution that should be taken into consideration. First and foremost, the government have to create more satisfactory jobs for the poor so as to meet their basic needs. Secondly, unless some students are able to obtain much knowledge and theories, vocational school may be a suitable way for this case. Therefore, the authorities also focus their attention on directing the future plans of youngster. Last but not least, each family needs to take control of contents watching by their child. this is because there are several violent movies that may cause negative impact to the mind and the soul of them.
In conclusion, lack of money and education are the root of all evil. Nevertheless, various methods and solutions are available which can curb this growing global problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81155015198 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67513813466 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592705167173 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.2346071447 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.071428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00673351136082 0.244688304435 3% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00290066612641 0.084324248473 3% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0104585004518 0.0667982634062 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00341811128295 0.151304729494 2% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00592034240799 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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