In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of labour. Some people regard this completely wrong while others consider it valuable and important for learning and enabling them to be responsible
No one can debate about the importance of work in man's life. However, the dispute is about what proper time for that, as many people think that the occupation in early age always comes with its drawbacks. I think the children who engaged in work would earn a lot of benefits.
Considering the valuable merits which are accompanied with working of youths, one of these values is taking the responsibilities and self-dependence. As well as exerting in tough circumstances, young people will learn how to stand with competitive and aggressive environment. Moreover, they could catch that how they survive in any hard challenges that they would face. Consequently, they will gain a real practice about the actual life's burdens that they might confront. For instance, one of my relative used to work since his childhood. As a result, he acknowledged about a lot of his career secrets so that he became tremendously successful businessman, otherwise, many of people who rely on their parents throughout their early stages struggle in the practical life after their graduation.
On the other hand, laboring in sooner steps may come with numerous hazards. Sequentially, many adolescents would be distracted of their education. Thus, they may fail in achieving the progress in their schools which is highly critical to guarantee a high quality life. Despite of education, the exposure to money in early years would have a risky impact on them. For example, in very poor countries where people are obligated to work from their start, we could see many young-aged worker who deviated from their objectives and they got engaged in criminal activities like drug dealing or abusing.
In conclusion, the advantages of work chiefly from childhood are undeniable. Nevertheless, the disadvantages are logical to take into consideration, the supervision and guidance of our kids could minimize these issues. I think the profits that we could obtain outweigh the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24761904762 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97853241191 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609523809524 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5367019143 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2352941176 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.70588235294 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11471983277 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349264086339 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305855689382 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0646206131609 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385710455864 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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