In many countries the cost of living is rising. What are the effects on individuals and society? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?
It is a hot topic of interest that people have increasingly spent for their demands. This has led to many serious consequences affecting our society and needs to be solved by both the government and the private sectors, which will be discussed below.
It is true that individuals find it hard to satisfy their needs due to paying more for fewer things. They will not feel motivated to work and contribute to the communities in the long run. The root cause for this may be that the uptrend of the living cost is usually accompanied by the states raising taxes, making people earn a minuscule fraction of their hard work’s achievement. Moreover, if the commodities price constantly goes up, there will be a chance for exploding economic inflation, which harms the society’s development.
However, there are some steps to be taken to alleviate the issue. A specific solution should be tax reduction for promoting materialism. Despite provoking the thought of making the national budget smaller, this idea can help accelerate national consumption due to lowering the prices. Thanks to the upraised demands of the public, companies will be eager to hire more employees, which helps solve the unemployment problem. Another attempt might be made by exporting and trading with other countries, thereby creating a foreign income upgrading the living standard, and making people’s lives affordable and comfortable.
In conclusion, while it is inevitable for the cost of living to rise, the government must take measures to help those in most need.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taxed'?
Suggestion: taxed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19521912351 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82710241332 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633466135458 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0103365384 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215523693989 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680252868027 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446893475245 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124556617763 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206930972235 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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