In many countries, fast food is increasingly common these days. Some people claim that the fast-food industry leads to many health issues and environmental problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, the fast food industry has grown in popularity among people which results in severe outcomes. In the long term, people can be harmfully affected such as health problems, environmental issues... Even though fast-food business has brought some benefits for people's daily lives. However, I firmly agree that we are faced with a foreseeable consequence owing to our eating fast food habits.
First of all,an increasing number of people now are using fast food in every single day, which may lead to high level of obesity. As a result. it is common to see that overweight people tend to be depressed. Eating fast food too much is not only detrimentally affect your mental health but also to harm physical well-being. Second, even though eating fast food is much more convenient for people these days, particularly the ones who have a hectic schedules, people tend to prefer waiting for someone cooking food for them. The main reason is that the food has just been cooked will be better and safer. Third, the more people eat fast food, the more plastic bags are used. Therefore, the environment is likely to be full of rubbish, tin cans,...These things lead to a severe environmental issues.
Nonetheless, people also cannot deny its convenience and helpfulness as they do not need to prepare food regularly; therefore, they would have less work to do. Some studies have shown that most people, in this day and age, are spending at least seven hours a day cooking their meals. It may leads to the case that they lose their balance in terms of time and not being able to accomplish vital tasks.
To sum up, while it is apparent that fast-food industry helps people's day-to-day lives much easier and people are now living in a fast-paced world. Nevertheless, I still strongly believe that people should not eat this kind of food too often if they do not want to suffer its harmful.
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...hich may lead to high level of obesity. As a result. it is common to see that over...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, so, still, therefore, third, well, while, at least, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54447957967 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596923076923 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9094704816 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6470588235 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4117647059 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356396141722 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112151932125 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628290522888 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223255427803 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669413543241 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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