In many countries governments spend a lot of money on internet infrastructure . Some say it is reasonable to allocate these funds,but others diasagree and say that many more important programs need this money . Discuss both views give your opinion and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Technology has become one of the most significant developments in many parts of the world . Whilst some argue that governments should spend this money on other facilities such as schools and hospitals rather than developing technology ,others consider that money invested in improving technology is worthwhile . I am of a film belief that technology innovation can benefit countries and boost global economy.
Some think that governments should put education and health well-being above technological progress. Government should prioritise their investments in education system and health service as these factors have the most impact on the quality of people's lives . Giving as an example, catering sufficient funds to schools to improve educational facilities in order that children can learn knowledge and skills effectively. Therefore, it is vitally important for governments to fund schools with a satisfying level of resources .
On the other hand , it is argued that developing technology which can hugely benefit nations . A case in point is that technology enhances commercial trade and improve efficiency . Taking global banking HSBC as an example , advanced technology provides the opportunity and arena for the company to spread their business over the world, which prospers their develpment and provides a greater employement scope . As a consequence ,it is believed that investing in infrastructure such as internet ,computers etc can be regarded as a medium of raising national income and secure the economic sustainability .
In conclusion, there is no doubt that states should prioritise the welfare of their citizens and ensure essential facilities are provied to the general public . However, it is fundamental to keep up speed with the latest technology as it is a power tool to sustain the national economy .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59352517986 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0866229733 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6628298182 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.615384615 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112355878811 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378582336291 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453774654834 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645849397042 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600594964666 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.