In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
It's undoubtedly that crime is increasing nowadays around the world and is becoming more widespread for several reasons. Should both the government and people work on together to solve this problem? This essay will discuss first the problem of rising the crime in societies then followed by the solution for such a problem.
There are a variety of different factors which led to increase the crime in societies. One of the major reasons can be the deterioration in the global economical situation in many countries which affect both ethical and behavioral people's attitude to the worst. The second reason is poverty as a result to the gap between the rich and the poor people which can make people to commit a crimes because of their needs. For instance, some people commit a crimes like pick pocketing, smuggling and property crimes and they are forced to do this kind of crimes to take what they do not have.
Despite the described reasons above, there are many actions should be taken by the government to solve the problem. First, government should impose only fines on petty crimes like parking and swearing while imprisoned others for committing serious crimes like smuggling, murder and arson. Second, governments and Business Leaders can provide job opportunities to poorer people which will definitely improve their economic situation. these vacancies can lower the gap between rich and poorer people that allow people for income equality and will lead to minimize the rate of crime. Finally, passing a new laws can deter the actions of crimes.
In conclusion, despite some obvious reasons for committing crimes, there are various measures can be taken by governments and individuals to tackle the problem to minimize the growing rates of crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14236111111 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56120817709 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.263628293 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.923076923 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259090576249 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948005527752 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582831678147 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15270608021 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778827742138 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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