In many countries nowadays, young single people no longer stay with their parents until they are married, but leave to study or work somewhere else. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages
In this day and age, a number of young teenagers do not live with their parents until they get hitched, they decide to live independently and continue their higher education or find a job. This trend has its own positive and negative side, but I personally believe that it has more plus points than minus points.
On the one hand, some people believe that leaving parents' house early will lead to many disadvantages.Can not deny that many young people are not yet ready to live independently, they are not yet matured in making right decisions and easy to choses wrong way. Moreover, many people cannot control themselves from the temptations of society, which lead to addiction to drugs, alcohol and pregnancy at a very young age.
Otherwise, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks.Firstly, when young people live independently, they will learn how to manage their life and treasure the time.They also learn how to make decisions and gain more experience in life so that they know how to take care of themselves, earn a living without much help from their parents.Secondly, the parents whose children leave home to go to work will feel relief and more comfortable. Because, they do not have to worry and take care of their progeny. Parents can cut down the financial support and save it for their retirement later.
In conclusion, I believe that the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages and I recommend other nations to encourage their young citizens to do this trend due to the good effects it brings for them are very effective.
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also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92164179104 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84676550618 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582089552239 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.846298202 49.4020404114 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.875 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313976629666 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126427957718 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524237327936 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183992641191 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265993537423 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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