In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this world, there are increasingly growing number of elders thanks to the advancement of modern health care service. While people argue that there are shortcomings for governments, which are completely stood out by the beneficial face due to several reasons.
Undeniably, when there are high number of the elderly population, governments have to cut more slices of national budget for old-care programs. It seems stem from the fact that some older people cannot make remuneration by themselves, so the supplement from governments is what they can count on. Hence, the budget for other national projects would be tighter, which may indirectly affect the living of citizen. The prime example, in a province in Vietnam, the progress of building a bridge to suffice the needs of transportation has been postponed as a significant part of development budget was cut for retirement provisional.
On the other hand, advantageous of high elder rate among population are outstanding. Firstly, people with high age can organize the lessons where they can deliver their life experiences to the youngsters. In this way, the youth of the country can adopt the wise advice of their senior and aid the path of self-development. For example, my university holds many orientations of senior people who have achieved their life-time goal to inspire the freshmen. In the long term, a young generation with proper development will be ensured.
Moreover, there are high demands in some of career that old people can participate in. In this fast-paced days, people have to work extremely hard to keep up with the workforce requirements. The implication of this is escalating in the job opportunities like housemaid and babysitter to support the busy houseowners. As these types of job do not require so many physical efforts, older people can probably be employed into and help those who need. The elderly can not only find their old-age joy in these works, but also make a moderate figure of remuneration to aid their offspring.
To be concluded, though the drawback of ageing population on national budget is worth considering, its bright points completely overwhelm the shortcomings the terms of educational and satisfy population needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24022346369 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00479730452 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586592178771 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.553132395 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.352941176 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246518141855 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732569829194 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486119873521 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122524188623 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436353525829 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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