In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
In today's society, there is a debate that people are now living longer than ever before can cause advantage or disadvantage. There are some reasons why people think this brings negative effects, from my perspective more age people are benefit in some ways.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why people think that these have negative outcomes of increasing ageing population. Firstly, they believe that creating over ageing population rate. An explanation for this is that, there is an ageing population trend leads to lacking many positions in companies or hospitals. Another weakness is that government has spend a lot of money to invest social policies. An example, when elder people are retired and do not have children to take care which means government takes responsibility for giving them money make sure they can live better.
On the other hand, I also hold a belief having more elderly person is a positive aspect. The first reason, this is proving the development of this country. To be more specify, people are now living longer than before is the evidence of high social policy. In addition, government has invested in taking care old people make sure they are received all benefits. The better life they have, the longer age the live. Another reason is that this is the way they inspire their good lifestyle to young person. An explanation for this is that people are living longer because of many aspects such as they eat pure products and cook with personal recipe. Taking exercises regularly and checking some health issues early. So, they could share their lifestyle to keep healthy and upgrade positive spirit.
In conclusion, people also hold a belief this problem is negative in some ways, but my point of view this is a advantage aspect and should remain stable. People are now living longer is not an issue if we could find to way to result.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 357, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...Another weakness is that government has spend a lot of money to invest social policie...
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Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...some ways, but my point of view this is a advantage aspect and should remain stab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87460815047 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41167924376 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7384639635 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3888888889 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457145819478 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139148220392 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995115028762 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309865837689 0.151304729494 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634633471855 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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