In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
Recent years have witnessed an upward trend in the average age of populations in many nations. Some individuals hold the view that this trend toward aging impact detrimentally to the authorities. From my perspective, I strongly believe that the benefits of this development pale in comparison to the potential drawbacks that the states could suffer from.
On the one hand, there are some eminent advantages which the community might derive from the considerable rise of the elderly, chief of which is the longer lifespan. As a matter of fact, the senior citizens could received government's allocation to medical healthcare, pension as well as proper housing or food. Therefore, a vast majority of the elder would have better living standard, which help them avoid to a wide range of illnesses that often occur in the older age group such as cancer or respiratory diseases. Additionally, thanks to the financial packages provided by the policy-makers to modify some public sites for senior residents like parks, roads, houses, there could be fewer accidents and a broaden understanding of public safety risks.
On the other hand, I lean toward the opinion that the dramatic jump of the number of elderly might pose financial burdens to the authorities. As a matter of fact, the governments in many countries have to give away a noticeable amount of fund for the perpetuation of old generations' health. While the seniors could enjoy the benefits deriving from that allocations, other aspects that contribute significantly to the development of the nation might not be given sufficient investment. By way of illustration, by giving a large proportion of national bank for health services or modifying the public construction for old people, the governments can have difficulties in raising funds for education. This effects deleteriously to the standard of educational providers. Therefore, part of the students would not have access to the comprehensive and professional courses at school, which may ruin their scholastic targets. In other words, the future of that nation will be put at risk as children determine crucially to the prospection in the following years.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that there are several advantages of the aging population in many countries. Nevertheless, I lean toward the opinion that this trend might link to a variety of hardship for the governments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 213, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'receive'
Suggestion: receive
...tter of fact, the senior citizens could received governments allocation to medical healt...
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Line 2, column 705, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ses, there could be fewer accidents and a broaden understanding of public safety risks. ...
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Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'generations'' or 'generation's'?
Suggestion: generations'; generation's
...unt of fund for the perpetuation of old generations health. While the seniors could enjoy t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26178010471 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06597144737 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557591623037 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7644878782 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.625 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159070352829 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505156576769 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405650937956 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952838973792 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110930701569 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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