In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
An ageing population is getting noticeably problematic in several nations and may become open to debate since some consider it troublesome while others regard it as an advantage to society. In my eyes, though a community including many elderly citizens can potentially face some drawbacks, it still can lead to much more significant benefits.
Among the disadvantages of a demographically ageing society is the worry about lacking a young labour force. Factually, it is the case that a higher proportion of the old is potentially linked to the notion that people in their adulthood favour investing in personal facets of themselves over thinking of marriage and particularly childbirth. This conception is popular in some developed countries and can decline the percentage of children and youngsters who will be their central future labour force. In addition, social welfare is also an aspect that an ageing population can unfavourably influence. In other words, if a country includes a high proportion of high-age residents, more tax money will be diverted into their pensions, social assistance and medical services.
However, these arguments may not stand up to scrutiny as an ageing population can give rise to more considerable advantages. Initially cited as a benefit of this trend regarding families is that it can allow those who are grandparents to partially shoulder the responsibility for childcare. The fact that more parents choose to pursue a job to earn for their families is common, and it, together with parenting and household chores, may overwhelm them. As a socially accepted solution, many let their children stay with their grandparents during work. In that way, the relationships between grandparents and their grandchildren can strengthen, and parents might not need to face too much pressure. Furthermore, though an ageing population might decrease young labour in the future, it, by contrast, can provide society with experienced employees. This source of the labour force can be regarded as beneficial since it can not only benefit businesses immediately wanting professional employees without much training but also allow the youth to have enough internships to gain much work experience.
In conclusion, despite its undeniable potential drawbacks, an ageing population can be more beneficial rather than detrimental, in my opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ing families is that it can allow those who are grandparents to partially shoulder the ...
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Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun let seems to be countable; consider using: 'many lets'.
Suggestion: many lets
... them. As a socially accepted solution, many let their children stay with their grandpar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45901639344 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09957474695 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9081535424 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.2 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204467051039 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680173022607 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444604128306 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131755486248 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294480181501 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.