In many countries, people can now buy household goods today microwave,ricecooker and television more than ever, is ist a positive or negative development?
Advancement in life through technological gadgets have made living easy,although,it has its other side effects.
In these modern time,people from different nations can purchase household equipment compared to the olden days. I strongly believe that this trend brings along a lot of benefits to human race.
To begin with,the use of electronic equipment at home now encourage multitasking. As may domestic work can be performed at the same time,Such as,programming the washing machine to be washing dirty clothes after loading it and at the same time, someone can be using the microwave to heat up food after setting the timer but these are not possible in the past. Because individual has to Carry out the task independently one after the other.Again,it saves time and energy used in performing these work separately.
Secondly,the purchasing of modern appliances at home these days by people also, help to build healthy relationships and prevent boredom. Like the telephones in today's time bridge the gap of communication among people. Individuals do not need to travel long distance again before they can communicate and share their feelings with each other. This could be done with the use of video calls on phone in as much, the phone is internet connected . In addition, it prevent or reduce stress involved in taking up these tasks, for instance, soft copies of textbooks could be downloaded and be read on the phone any time at such person's leisure period. However, this is not possible in the olden days as people have to go around with the hard copies of these textbooks to read.
In conclusion, the use of technology has influenced our life and what will buy as it makes like comfortable and many things could bdone simultaneously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05902777778 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91989040693 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635416666667 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7103281931 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.076923077 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0724610475465 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276903758964 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287255299792 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0422979850109 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257566593111 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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