In many countries, people now wear Western clothes (suits, jeans) rather than traditional clothing. Why? Is this a positive or negative development?
People today tend to wear clothes from Western countries instead of their own nations. It is true that several reasons cause this trend, but this tendency is not a positive tendency.
To begin with, there are reasons why people often choose Western clothes to buy. The first one is that many individuals want to look more fashionable and special in others’ eye. Since most expensive clothes brands such as Valentino and Dior usually offer the latest trends for their customers across the world, a great number of people are willing to purchase jeans and suits of those companies. This would help them show a high social status and feel more confident with their peers at schools or workplaces. Additionally, the entertainment industries like films and music in developed countries also have had a strong influence on the young generations. For example, many of my friends always search for clothes that their American idols regularly wear in their shows to copy, because wearing those can make one’ fans look alike their favourite celebrity.
However, this development may negatively affect individuals as well as society. Firstly, buying clothes of luxurious brands often costs a large amount of money, while this money can be better used for travelling to new countries. People can therefore have opportunities to relax and discover different cultures and customs at the same time. Secondly, with an increasing quantity of persons wearing Western clothes rather than traditional ones, they have contributed to losing national identity which allows their hometowns to be distinguished from others. Thus, it is necessary to keep up old traditions by less clothing from the Western parts of the world.
In conclusion, this problem might be explained by aforementioned reasons, and it would have adverse impacts on both citizens and society as a whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 801, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...in their shows to copy, because wearing those can make one' fans look alike their fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28187919463 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72790516708 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661073825503 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7365217648 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.428571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6428571429 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297406118417 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906355687959 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522135754137 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158895786189 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796625568127 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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