In many countries, people now wear western-style dress such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, it is noticeable that a growing number of dressing in western-influenced clothing instead of their traditional clothes. In my opinion, it closely related to cultural and commercial globalization and bring about broadly negative effect to traditional clothing.
The main cause of this phenomenon is the convenience of technology and transportation which accelerate globalization and allow corporations more easily affect people wearing. Due to globalization the individual usually inclines to accept mainstream clothing and it is more comfortable as well as more suitable for different occasions. For instance, people would wear t-shirts and jeans rather than traditional riko or fodoy in daily life. Furthermore, their corporation usually has affordable prices which will attract more people to buy. For example, companies like Zara and H&M always produce abundant identical items so that they will have more competitiveness on price
There is no doubt that this influence enables people to get lower prices, however, there are also some negative impacts on this cultural diversity. First, national consciousness will be weakened under this tremendous trend. Thus, it will lead the country to lose the traditional techniques such as textile and dyeing clothing. Second, we should not be completely discarded our local clothing, if we do not promote them it is likely that it may become extinct. Accordingly, these local industries symbolize our culture and identity so it is necessary to preserve them.
In conclusion, western fashion trends are ubiquitous today which represents traditional clothing is in negative development. Personally, it is important to strike a balance between following new culture and protect traditional culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74712643678 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19211128154 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2861633539 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.384615385 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8461538462 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244927119604 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778819539712 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591079447738 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130947463421 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00928630386989 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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