In many countries, people now wear western-style dresses such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?
In recent decades, the global fashion landscape has witnessed a significant shift towards embracing western-style clothing such as suits and jeans and a gradual detachment from traditional attire. This change can be attributed to the influence of globalization. While many people consider it a positive taste alteration, I contend that it is likely to pose profound negative consequences on cultural aspects.
One of the primary reasons for the growing popularity of western-style clothing might be the influence of globalization. The fact is that interconnectedness among societies leads to not only exchanging ideas and trends but also more enthusiasm to imitate styles that can be a symbol of forward-thinking. In other words, western-style represents openness to global influences and is often associated with progress and modernity. As a result, with the prevalence of western outfits, the fashion market has embraced related products, offering a wide range of choices to customers. This change in global retail chains ,therefore, has the potential to manipulate individuals' style as it projects the viewpoint that you are obsolete unless you choose to have items in trend.
However, the permeation of western-style clothing has both merits and demerits. In terms of advantages, people feel more comfortable in this outfit. Compared to traditional clothes which mostly have several pieces and designed fabrics, it is more suitable for people who are physically active or live in warm places. Besides, traditional clothes are often expensive since the majority of them are hand-made and unique. In contrast, suits and jeans are available at different prices and brands, and customers can manage their budgets for clothing. For example, they have the right to choose from fast fashion brands like ZARA or luxurious designers like Versace.
Despite the positive points of western-style clothing, I believe that the negative aspects of its prevalence are profound and should be taken into account. One of the downsides refers to cultural erosion in the long run. Traditional attire defines the cultural background of a society and is tied with the history of a nation, which represents their beliefs and pride. If people stick to choosing suits and jeans, this cultural heritage would be abolished for the next generations. Preserving a nation's identity, thus, can be facilitated by emphasizing the traditional costume.
In conclusion, the underlying reason for the increasing preference of western-style clothing to traditional outfits can be globalization, perception of modernity, and accessibility. While there are benefits in opting for suits and jeans such as being comfortable and a wide variety in price and brands, I assert that the drawbacks of omitting traditional style can be more serious. Nations are woven with their history, and clothes play a key role in demonstrating their beliefs and identity. I think keeping this heritage alive for our children is a must.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2539.0 1615.20841683 157% => OK
No of words: 462.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49567099567 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13609175474 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536796536797 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 795.6 506.74238477 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5935861813 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.391304348 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0869565217 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.39130434783 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274935827674 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775730938229 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476152385401 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172651739013 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538017952385 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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