An undeniable fact is that people are more curious about knowing the lifestyle of different countries. After retirement, an individual tend to migrate to an overseas country or to other parts of their own nation. I shall articulate the reasons of this migration ant the outcomes in the upcoming paragraphs.
On the unitary hand, people, somewhere, have a craze to move all around the world after their retirement. They do so, as they want to explore themselves with different cultures, languages, traditions and lifestyle. For example, country like India, have a variety of traditions , festivals related to religions or cultures. To introduce with numerous formats of lives, trends and many more, people wants to move in other nations to enhance their knowledge or communicating skills by meeting with different people's and to know about the behaviour and nature of person who belongs to different nations or states.
On the contrary, the outcomes of this migration can make some negative effects on one's life and behaviour. The foremost factor is that by this movement, the financial budget of family may get disturbed, as the shipment from one place to another consume large amount of money which may lasts this crises for longer period. One another factor is the atmospheric disturbance. An individual has to face such problems to get familiar with surrounding, food and others. Hence, this situation affects negatively to an individual.
In conclusion, from the above discussion, it is clear that to enhance the knowledge of to know about different culture people tends to move to other parts of country whereas, on the similar side, this affects the family negatively.
- In many countries people tend to move overseas or move to a different part of their country after their retirement Discuss why it is so and the outcomes of this situation Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 67
- Some people are afraid to go out for fear of being robbed on the streets Still there are robberies that happen inside houses What do you think is the best thing a person can do to ensure his her own security Use specific reasons and examples to support yo 61
- The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- Many efforts has been made by countries to address challenges concerning the environment but the situation has not improved What are the possible reasons for environment degradattion are there any solution to combat 84
- More and more people are working from home rather than at the workplace Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers an their families but other think it will being stress to the home Discuss both the view and give your opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, whereas, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21033210332 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79844865575 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6592576661 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281192401292 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857044527591 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666001311452 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167481057357 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631849055333 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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