In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have positive or negative effects on the society?
The population of aged persons is elevating in numerous nations over the globe. There could be various reasons for this phenomenon with some favourable and adverse consequences in the community. However, both the impacts will be discussed further with relevant exemplification.
The first and foremost beneficial effect among the individuals by living their life to the fullest is due to the advancement of the health care system of the country. The younger ones and adults can have a chance to stay and enjoy with their grandparents and parents respectively. Moreover, the older generation is more experienced and has valuable assets therefore, they can guide and provide advice to their close family members and keep them on track and make them understand how to deal with each and every situation they face. For instance, the grandparents play an essential role in a family’s unity and if all the families will have an aged person to advise then it may help in society’s overall development and enhancement as they are having high moral values and experience.
However, I would not regard the health problems associated with older people such as Alzheimer’s or pain in joints. As the old people are prone to diseases, they will have to pay for their hospital bills. In addition to it, they will turn into a burden to a family. In the current generation, the children make their retired parents stay in old-age homes as they can’t afford the time, care and money they need. Apart from that, the government institutions will need to pay for the retired generation which will eventually turn into a financial crisis in the economical sector.
To sum up, there is a multitude of gains for the longevity of the older generations can offer to the society such as the priceless advice to the youth along with the decision-making. Nevertheless, it can also make a negative effect on societal development as they need funds for the cure of the diseases otherwise they will die out of pain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, apart from, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97910447761 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84509716126 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8390183251 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.098130072523 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345641848899 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303982995957 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594718584948 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024557944006 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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