In many countries the propotion of older people is steadly uncrese some think this is good while others beleive this is problem for a country discuss both views and given your opinion.
The given tolic should the older people is steadly belive this problem for this opinion is i shall explore the demensions of the topic throuth example and serhons and shape up my opinion by the end.
To begin with that is older people very experies and it can any situation easy to solve . Wherever the oldder teacher is very experies as compaired to young teacher . Goverment payed many money . On the other hand after 60 to 65 years he donot pay income tax .
Secondly because he donot have any job and the goverment responsibility take a hopitalize and pension . Knowledge is very in the experies . Goverment payed pension and very burdan . Goverment should rules increses year 60 to 65 .
Conclusion goverment that is payed money and take a rules for 60 to 65 years payed money becouse than very expensive hardly contry of burdan .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, secondly, so, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 686.0 1615.20841683 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 144.0 315.596192385 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76388888889 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48100993796 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 176.041082164 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 506.74238477 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9274974842 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127943293167 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441709730399 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811064059024 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903893521511 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110921605386 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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