In many countries the propotion of older people is steadly uncrese some think this is good while others beleive this is problem for a country discuss both views and given your opinion.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...belive this problem for this opinion is i shall explore the demensions of the top...
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Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...s and it can any situation easy to solve . Wherever the oldder teacher is very exp...
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Line 2, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...y experies as compaired to young teacher . Goverment payed many money . On the oth...
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Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...ired to young teacher . Goverment payed many money . On the other hand after 60 to 6...
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Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun money seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much money', 'a good deal of money'.
Suggestion: much money; a good deal of money
...ired to young teacher . Goverment payed many money . On the other hand after 60 to 65 year...
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Line 2, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...ung teacher . Goverment payed many money . On the other hand after 60 to 65 years ...
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Line 2, column 258, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...r 60 to 65 years he donot pay income tax . Secondly because he donot have any jo...
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...onsibility take a hopitalize and pension . Knowledge is very in the experies . Gov...
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...sion . Knowledge is very in the experies . Goverment payed pension and very burdan...
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... Goverment payed pension and very burdan . Goverment should rules increses year 60...
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...ment should rules increses year 60 to 65 . Conclusion goverment that is payed mon...
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Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a rule' or simply 'rules'?
Suggestion: a rule; rules
... goverment that is payed money and take a rules for 60 to 65 years payed money becouse ...
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...n very expensive hardly contry of burdan .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, secondly, so, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 686.0 1615.20841683 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 144.0 315.596192385 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76388888889 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48100993796 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 176.041082164 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 506.74238477 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9274974842 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127943293167 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441709730399 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811064059024 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903893521511 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110921605386 0.056905535591 195% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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