in many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour.
explain the causes and solutions.
Nowadays, numerous schools world-wide are facing the problem of student misbehaviour. The causes of this can be traced back to their mental health, but there are potential ways to tackle with this problem.
First of all, the prominent cause behind such bad behaviour conducted by students the amount of interaction between them and their teachers. Teachers generally don't know about the situations faced by any student if they don't interact in a well manner. Sometimes, students have family related trauma which has detrimental effects on their behaviour. Poor parental guidance can lead to mistreatment by the children. Furthermore, some schools give homework and assignments to their students in unreasonably large amount. This overloaded work pressurise them and ultimately lead to poor behaviour.
Because the problem demands immediate solutions, it requires joint efforts of school authorities and parents. Teachers should only give appropriate amount of assignments according to each student's capability. Moreover, interaction between teachers and students should increase, to be aware about their mental situations and requirements. Sometimes, there might be the case of bullying because of which students misconduct others. This type of problems require attention and effective solutions. One of them could be individual counseling to help them tackle the issue. Also, parents should intervene in their children's life to know about the issues faced by them, and they should be careful about the way they treat their own children. If parents are still being careless, their counseling should also be undertaken by authorities.
The busy world we live in today causes many problems in children's mental health which are most of the times, overlooked. Parents, teachers as well as government have to join together to get this global issue solved because the behaviour conducted by students will be their basic nature in future, which will he harmful to themselves as well as society.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... bad behaviour conducted by students the amount of interaction between them and t...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... and their teachers. Teachers generally dont know about the situations faced by any ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...situations faced by any student if they dont interact in a well manner. Sometimes, s...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...amount of assignments according to each students capability. Moreover, interaction betwe...
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Line 7, column 287, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... by students will be their basic nature in future, which will he harmful to themselves as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, still, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52614379085 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80897703824 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2017573302 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9444444444 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202462280766 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694761632703 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526582028291 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147138236669 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494650663684 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... bad behaviour conducted by students the amount of interaction between them and t...
^^
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... and their teachers. Teachers generally dont know about the situations faced by any ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...situations faced by any student if they dont interact in a well manner. Sometimes, s...
^^^^
Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...amount of assignments according to each students capability. Moreover, interaction betwe...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 287, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... by students will be their basic nature in future, which will he harmful to themselves as...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, still, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52614379085 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80897703824 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2017573302 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9444444444 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202462280766 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694761632703 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526582028291 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147138236669 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494650663684 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.