In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour? What do you
think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Poor student behaviour seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern
lifestyles are probably responsible for this.
In many countries, the birth rate is decreasing so that families are smaller with fewer children.
These children are often spoiled, not in terms of love and attention because working parents do
not have the time for this, but in more material ways. They are allowed to have whatever they
want, regardless of price, and to behave as they please. This means that the children grow up
without consideration for others and without any understanding of where their standard of living
comes from.
When they get to school age they have not learnt any self control or discipline. They have less
respect for their teachers and refuse to obey school rules in the way that their parents did.
Teachers continually complain about this problem and measures should be taken to combat the
situation. But I think the solution to the problem lies with the families, who need to be more
aware of the future consequences of spoiling their children. If they could raise them to be
considerate of others and to be social, responsible individuals, the whole community would
benefit.
Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this, and high quality nursery schools
could be established that would support families more in terms of raising the next generation.
The government should fund this kind of parental support, because this is no longer a problem
for individual families, but for society as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12062256809 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65741948184 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579766536965 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3135237513 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166428166452 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644820026773 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038059680879 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053560854097 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469093948137 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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