in many countries small shops and towns centers are going out of business, because people tend to drive to the large out of town stores. This result in an increase in car use, and it also mean that people without car has limited access the to out of town stores. do you think advantages of such developement outweight its disadvantages.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in using cars by people. Some number of people have interest to go long drive and another use car because of craze. However, there are many pros and cons and I will explain why in this essay.
There are number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that number of cars are launched in markets day by day. Moreover, people are influenced about technology by television adds, but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chance of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned preposition is that it is likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Only when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of purchasing grocery material, clothes, eatable things and, gadgets product from outside the town.
In view of the arguments outline above, one can conclude that the benefit of buying things from local shops are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98775510204 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74034141189 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624489795918 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.520485217 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.833333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124828477502 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446032690831 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538392112031 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739833751324 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064728470317 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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