At present, in different countries of the world, the elderly ones are being inadequately honored. This essay will highlight causes for this tendency and the issues this response can bring on the community.
From my point of view, today, what kids generally think is that their life should be smooth. However, while older people attempt to analyze what's good for kids at home, the younger generation does not want anyone to interrupt their plans, be it an academic or professional one. So when senior citizens say 'No, to such things, the youth harbors resentment against them. Similarly, we are too much inclined to internalize the practices of western civilzation where everyone is concerned about oneself. Hence, the value system is changing due to the assumption of new norms, breeding hostility towards elderly population.
This actually can have serious repercussions on the society in the long-run. What I mean by this is that when we start disrespecting elders, we also start giving a low regard to almost everyone in the society. This creates a ripple effect leading to the impairment of established beliefs and revered traditions having been passed down to us by the earlier generations. On top of that, there will be flagrant rupture of conventional etiquettes while the line between what is right and what is wrong becomes blurred.
To conclude, the disrespect that most elderly are experiencing is due to one's aims that no one from the present era would like to see thwarted. The society may have to face a loss of discipline on which it currently places an astronomically high value.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, hence, however, if, may, similarly, so, while, i mean, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05660377358 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79012141329 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671698113208 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5780984062 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216296258848 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649081800008 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551860620679 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119494395992 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504528149619 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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