In many countries traditional food are being replaced by international food. This is having on negative effects on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern era, the globalization and international trade facilities, international food brands are present in almost all the major cities. So, food choices of people are being to move towards international food instead of traditional food. I,completely agree with the statement, which relates about the negative effects of international food on society and family.
Fist of all, international brands of fast food like MCDONALD'S, KFC and many more covered the major countries of the world, with their taste and good services. As result of this, demands of international food raised up day-to-day. Furthermore, nowadays, people having the busiest lifestyle due to their job timings and many other reasons. Therefore, people are demanding for international fast food ,which is easy to available within short period of time. As result of this, citizen taken unhealthy food in form of fast food and suffered from varieties of diseases. According to the survey, it resulted that approximately 60 percentage of total teenagers of India suffered from different diseases, behind of these only reason is international fast food.
In Further, traditional foods having number of essential nutrients and low-fat. In contrast, international junk food only having lot of fat.as result of this, society carrying number of members, who facing the obesity due to lack of physical activities and eaten junk food daily. Not only families affected by negative effects but country also affect the same. Country has to allocate more budget to treat the ill population due to more reliability of people on international food. In recent financial year, government increased fund about 20 billions rupees in the annual budget behind the medication relief of obese citizens.
In conclusion, this has so many negative consequences that individual as well as government would take some proactive steps to revert the trend of traditional foods.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45637583893 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97551680953 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577181208054 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4044560625 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.133854372798 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654520154528 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224387971319 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768070543185 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.