In this modern age, younger generation are taking less interest to read newspapers and watch news television channel. It is true that mainly the news occurs like bombard, terrorist attack, International affairs, political news and Business news. This are the news that today youth people are getting bored to read and watch on news tv. So, on this issue, there are some reasons that young people are ignoring to read and watch news information sources. However, I personally believe with that this consequence can be solved.
To begin with, youth are having low ecouragement to have a look on mass media sources because to avoid dishearten news such a terrorist attack and bomb blasts as we can take real example of Syria attack and natural disasters like earthquake, tsunami and soil erosion. Thus, these sorts of news can make them emotional, mental stress and aniexty.
Another factor is nowadays young people are fond of using social media sites like google, twitter, facebook, YouTube and much more through the internet. This sites provide international news into bullet points. Moreover, with the use of the internet, they are allow to read and watch any category of news they wants to without any restriction from another. Whereas, it takes long time while reading, watching andcollecting the news information from the mass media sources.
To sum up. I strongly trust with that if the media house change in writing style into bullet points and present the individual news convert ino hightlight short stories, then definitely it will encourage them to read and watch news form the mass media sources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, then, thus, whereas, while, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08679245283 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4878200986 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7904802826 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.692307692 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17871293815 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075532849431 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547600842897 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105816055982 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722939217255 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.