It is a proven fact that, young people are no longer interested in reading the newspapers or follow the TV for updated news. However, young people do interested in news and they depend on other sources like websites and social networking sites.
The usage of internet has been increasing in many countries and it is helping the young people to get least news or current affairs. Though newspapers provide trust worthy information, young people mostly depend on internet. Apart from internet, there are several other reasons too. Traditional newspapers or TV shows are mainly focused on mid age group. Young people are no longer showing interest in the content written in news articles or on the TV debates. It is important for the news agencies to make some changes to the traditional approach and focus more on the teenagers.
In a recent survey, it has proved that, youngsters are more interested in entertainment news such as Sports and Movies. Therefore, the focus of newspapers should be more on these topics to attract more readers from teenage age group. Moreover, to persuade them to read a newspaper, we should tell them about the benefits they can reap from reading newspapers.
To conclude, young people do not read newspapers because they can receive news from other sources like internet. In addition, they are not interested in the content created by newspapers or in the news channels. However, by creating content or news interested to young readers, newspaper or news channel can win the young readers too.
- Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 56
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- You need to take leave from your work of over one-month for personal reasons. Write a letter to your boss.In your letterExplain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need.Explain how you will keep up to date while you are awaySuggest how yo 73
- You are looking for a part time job at a football club.Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter:Introduce yourselfExplain what experience and special skills you haveTell him/her when you think you could start. 78
- Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'get the least'.
Suggestion: get the least
...s and it is helping the young people to get least news or current affairs. Though newspap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01968503937 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6434919096 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503937007874 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.8518828984 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.0714285714 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245354922777 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972461270849 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655055312598 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167977326949 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609411519543 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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