Of late, competitive games have been playing a vital role in developing pupil’s cognitive development. While many experts are claiming that it assists children in many ways, few people are arguing that it would have adverse effects on child capabilities. In my opinion, such pursuits would help adolescents to strengthen their both physical and mental characteristics.
To embark upon, by participating in competitions kids able to learn how to be more challenging with the others at a very young age. In other words, the participation of children in international sporting events enables them to think quickly to make crucial decisions in a short span of time. As a result of this, it not only benefits them in learning new skills but also adds a whole new dimension in creating a successful career. On top of this, these kinds of activities could provide a sophisticated platform for youngsters to enhance their fitness levels.
Shifting towards the second school of thought, there are myriad things to support their argument. Firstly, either loosing against the counterparts or being defeated in front of the crowd might have an adverse effect on their confidence levels. Secondly, more practice might be leading more injuries and it could be a hurdle for their sporting career. Thus, because of all the above-stated points, the majority of the students tend to skip their sporting activities at the early stages of life.
To conclude, though competitive sports has minimal negative effects, it is highly beneficial for them to enhance their abilities such as decision making, a new path to the career progressiveness as well as improving body stamina.
- A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do there and wha 81
- With an increasing population communicating via Internet and text message, face to face communication will became a thing in the past. To what extent do you agree? 78
- In recent years , many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping.Is this a positive or negative development ? 61
- Some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. However, others believe that happiness has nothing to do with money. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion and examples 84
- We have been living in the nuclear age now for over half a century. Since the first atomic bombs were developed, nuclear technology had provided governments with the ability to totally destroy the planet. Yet the technology has been put to positive use as 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2052238806 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96418765311 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649253731343 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6364344457 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173862880446 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534308936565 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435663152433 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952622022447 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281525747555 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.